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	<title>Comments on: Your Copy Sucks: how to write dialog (or dialogue)</title>
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		<title>By: PR Cog</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-1703</link>
		<dc:creator>PR Cog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 21:26:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So is it dialog or dialogue? I&#039;ve always used the latter but spellcheck hates it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So is it dialog or dialogue? I&#39;ve always used the latter but spellcheck hates it.</p>
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		<title>By: Christina K</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-1702</link>
		<dc:creator>Christina K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 21:23:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Where&#039;s CT with &quot;May the force be with you&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Where&#39;s CT with &#8220;May the force be with you&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: TJ Dietderich</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-1701</link>
		<dc:creator>TJ Dietderich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 19:16:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It would work . . . if you want to sound like Yoda. Which some might!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It would work . . . if you want to sound like Yoda. Which some might!</p>
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		<title>By: Kate Ottavio</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-1700</link>
		<dc:creator>Kate Ottavio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 18:18:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Can I go grammar-geek for a second here? Another thing that I learned at my job (and now drives me nuts) is the order of the name of the person quoted and the word said. For example, you wrote: “I am so excited right now,” Keith said. We say Keith said, because we say “he said.” Were we to say “said Keith,” like so many do, we would be saying “said he,” and that doesn’t work. Ok, I’m done. Thank you for allowing me to geek-out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can I go grammar-geek for a second here? Another thing that I learned at my job (and now drives me nuts) is the order of the name of the person quoted and the word said. For example, you wrote: “I am so excited right now,” Keith said. We say Keith said, because we say “he said.” Were we to say “said Keith,” like so many do, we would be saying “said he,” and that doesn’t work. Ok, I’m done. Thank you for allowing me to geek-out.</p>
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		<title>By: PRCog</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-426</link>
		<dc:creator>PRCog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:26:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So is it dialog or dialogue? I&#039;ve always used the latter but spellcheck hates it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So is it dialog or dialogue? I&#39;ve always used the latter but spellcheck hates it.</p>
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		<title>By: Christina K</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-423</link>
		<dc:creator>Christina K</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:23:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Where&#039;s CT with &quot;May the force be with you&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Where&#39;s CT with &#8220;May the force be with you&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: TJ Dietderich</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-413</link>
		<dc:creator>TJ Dietderich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 15:16:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It would work . . . if you want to sound like Yoda. Which some might!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It would work . . . if you want to sound like Yoda. Which some might!</p>
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		<title>By: Kate Ottavio</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-407</link>
		<dc:creator>Kate Ottavio</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 14:18:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Can I go grammar-geek for a second here? Another thing that I learned at my job (and now drives me nuts) is the order of the name of the person quoted and the word said. For example, you wrote: “I am so excited right now,” Keith said. We say Keith said, because we say “he said.” Were we to say “said Keith,” like so many do, we would be saying “said he,” and that doesn’t work. Ok, I’m done. Thank you for allowing me to geek-out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can I go grammar-geek for a second here? Another thing that I learned at my job (and now drives me nuts) is the order of the name of the person quoted and the word said. For example, you wrote: “I am so excited right now,” Keith said. We say Keith said, because we say “he said.” Were we to say “said Keith,” like so many do, we would be saying “said he,” and that doesn’t work. Ok, I’m done. Thank you for allowing me to geek-out.</p>
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		<title>By: TJ Dietderich</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-405</link>
		<dc:creator>TJ Dietderich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 22:05:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;No problem,&quot; I said, pretty pleased with myself but hiding it well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;No problem,&#8221; I said, pretty pleased with myself but hiding it well.</p>
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		<title>By: heatherdueitt</title>
		<link>http://prbreakfastclub.com/2009/09/30/your-copy-sucks-how-to-write-dialog-or-dialogue/comment-page-1/#comment-402</link>
		<dc:creator>heatherdueitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 16:40:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks TJ! My boss will appreciate this lesson.</description>
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